над учение деятельность школьника​

Born Gel Verne February 8, 1828 in Nantes, in the family of a lawyer. Raised in a family with legal roots was reflected in the biography of Jules Verne. In Paris in the future writer was received legal knowledge. But in addition to the rights Jules Verne was fascinated by literature. He wrote stories, Comedy. For the first time his play was staged in 1850, and the first printed work was the novel of the series "Extraordinary journeys" in 1863. Since Verne tried many professions, but did not cease to write.
The first novel by Jules Verne brought him great success. Encouraged by the positive reviews, the writer continued to create adventure novels, impregnated scientific wonders.
Verne constantly traveled: in the USA, the Mediterranean sea, has traveled almost the whole of Europe. For his biography of Jules Verne wrote 66 novels, many short stories, plays. In the works of Verne woven noble heroes, incredible journey, the exact description of the equipment.
Many novels of Jules Verne were filmed. Among the famous of his works - "Journey to the centre of the Earth, "From the Earth to the moon", "the Children of captain Grant", "20 000 leagues under the sea", "Around the world in 80 days" and many others. Verne was wounded from a gun, so was confined to bed, but died from diabetes.

When I was almost 1 year old - в ед. числе. В этом же предложении, если уж "мои родители говоряТ", тогда "My parents say". Далее, здесь же, не думаю что надо использовать продолженное.
либо так если используем when,
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old when they gave me pencils and paper for drawing,
I was banging rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
либо так, если не используем:
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old they gave me pencils and paper for drawing but I banged rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
Because of it - лучше That's why.
I like it because I can do it very well anyway my teachers say it. Это лучше разделить на 2: I like it because I can do it very well. At least my teachers say it.

Ещё подумаю, наверняка не всё))