ПАМАГИТИИИИ ПАМАГИТИИИИИ ПАМАГИТИИИИИ

The best of the worst schools in the world is, undoubtedly, a leatherworking school, located 2 blocks down. In it, slaves are taught to bring to life deep dark fantasies. Fighting without clothes with the principal is a prerequisite for entering this school.

The director of this school is the famous master of leather affairs Abu Ibn Dvosch, also known as “Mountain Monkey”, for outstanding achievements in sports, saving children during a fire, and distributing humanitarian aid in the form of CP.

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When I was almost 1 year old - в ед. числе. В этом же предложении, если уж "мои родители говоряТ", тогда "My parents say". Далее, здесь же, не думаю что надо использовать продолженное.
либо так если используем when,
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old when they gave me pencils and paper for drawing,
I was banging rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
либо так, если не используем:
My parents say that when I was almost 1 year old they gave me pencils and paper for drawing but I banged rhytm of the music which I heard lately.
Because of it - лучше That's why.
I like it because I can do it very well anyway my teachers say it. Это лучше разделить на 2: I like it because I can do it very well. At least my teachers say it.

Ещё подумаю, наверняка не всё))