... did you work when you left university? -In a large company А)Who
B) Why
C) When
D) What
E) Where/Why/Who​

Я не знаю, есть ли  у тебя братья или сёстры, поэтому сделала несколько вариантов, можешь выбрать. Если у тебя несколько братьев или сестёр, или брат с сестрой, или кто-то ещё, напиши мне в комментариях, я переделаю.

Если у тебя брат:
Hello, Nick!
 I want to tell you about what me and my family are doing at home today.
My family isn't large.  It consists of four members : me, mother, father and my brother.
My mother is cooking dinner now. She cooks well.  My father is reading a book at the moment. He likes reading books. And my brother is listening to music. He loves rock music. 
After dinner me and my family will  go for a walk. I'll take a picture of us.
I can send the photo later, if you want.
Bye!

Если у тебя сестра:
Hello, Nick!
 I want to tell you about what me and my family are doing at home today.
My family isn't large.  It consists of four members : me, mother, father and my sister.
My mother is cooking dinner now. She cooks well.  My father is reading a book at the moment. He likes reading books. And my sister is listening to music. She loves classic music. 
After dinner me and my family will  go for a walk. I'll take a picture of us.
I can send the photo later, if you want.
Bye!

Если ты один: 
Hello, Nick!
 I want to tell you about what me and my family are doing at home today.
My family isn't large.  It consists of four members : me, my mother, and father.
My mother is cooking dinner now. She cooks well.  And my father is reading a book at the moment. He likes reading books. 
After dinner me and my family will  go for a walk. I'll take a picture of us.
I can send the photo later, if you want.
Bye!

1) Перестрой предложение: We're having a great time in Dubai.
2) We're staying in the Burj Al Arab hotel, which has 7 stars. This is the best hotel and it's form reminds me of a boat. (Так будет получше)
3) Luxe room замени на luxe suite.
4) ... we saw Dubai
5) Замени "Here it has an amazing view..." на Up from here Dubai has an amazing view.
6) ... had a lunch.. (артикль забыл)
7)... the food was delicious and the view on the town was brilliant. (лучше так сказать)
8) Then we went TO see THE fountain show. (без of Dubai)
9) It IS located of-не нужно тут
10) This is the largest and the highest fountain in the world.
11) Не walk, а ride