Нужна с английским. Решил сам, нужна проверка.

1. the world is becoming more global.
2. people, especially teenagers, want to know more about other people and places; they want to know other cultures.
3. therefore, they need to know foreign languages.
4. some people think that English should be simplified.
5. because will need a little time to study it and people can easily learn it ourselves, without visiting any language courses.
6. but it's hard to Express your thoughts with a limited number of words.
7. the British and Americans probably won't be able to understand this language.
8. although English is a difficult language it does not mean that we have the power to change it.
9. language is a precious heritage and we should respect it.
10. making English language easier, people can warp it and it will disappear along with its complexity.

As you know Hollywood is the home of the American film industry. Hollywood ...(offers) an ideal climate and different places to make films.They are much...better  than many offers. You can find deserts , hills and mountains , small seaside towns and the city of Los Angeles there. Since the 1920s thousands of directors have made their films in this place. Nowadays Hollywood is .more popular than ever. You can watch films of its studios in all parts of the world. But these days film-makers prefer to send crews to real places to make films there , and many studios are close in Hollywood.