1. Any student who wishes to join the class should meet with the professor first.
2. Hawaii, which is comprised of several islands, is popular with tourists who come from all over the world.
3. I need some advance warning about water shut-offs in my apartment building.
4. Please assemble together the pages of this document.
5. In the management of natural resources an important role is now given to the government.
6. It was the final goal of the game that determined the state championship.
7. There were two students at my summer camp who had severe psychological problems.
8. I will now make a few observations concerning the matter of faculty salaries.
9. The milk bottle was slammed into the wall by John.
10. The current focus of the KATU administration is raising its QS university ranking.
11. The detective conducted an investigation of the crime.
12. The intention of the jury is to reach a decision.
13. The delay of the flight was caused by the storm.
14. The decision to construct a health science building was made by the university rector.
15. The procedural change resulted in an increase in enrollment and retention of students.
Рекомендация :
1. Don’t be wordy and complex. Express meaning directly and in as few words as possible to get your meaning across. Reduce unnecessary words.
2. Use clear and direct writing to convey your meaning.
3. Try to use active voice whenever you can.
4. Start with a substantive subject. “There” or “it” + a form of the verb “to be” often gives you a “round-about” sentence structure with too many words.
5. Avoid nominalizations.