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hand, some peop
family
Conclude
• All in all, ...
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Writing
9 a) 10.5.1 10.5.5 Read the rubric and match the viewpoints
(1-5) to the examples/reasons/results (a-e) that support
them.
sum up
Express opinion
In my viewlopin
I feel/believe/thi
I'm concerned,
You've had a class discussion on the following statement: People
should live without money. Write an essay giving reasons to
support your opinion (120-180 words).
Plan
Introduction
(Para 1) state
Main Body
1
Viewpoints
Example/Reason & Result
You will be able to a There is no need to spend a certain
use and improve
number of hours at a job. You can do
your talents if you
your work at your own pace.
live without money. b You will only spend time with people
Living without
who live nearby. You may lose touch
money requires a lot
with some people.
c You will have to grow your own food.
This takes a lot of time and energy.
(Para 2) first v
rease
(Para 3) Secc
reas
(Para 4) opp
exal
2.
Conclusion
(Para 5) rese
3
of hard work
Living without
money is good for
relationships
Life is less rushed
d You will use your abilities to make
4
Cha
without money
5 Living without
money makes your
social circle smaller.
When you fin
things or offer services to trade for
the things you can't make or do. Your
skills will improve
e You have to work with others to get
what you need to survive. You will
have better communication skills
and friendships.
essay, check
number
inclusion
formal la
rrecto​