Write a narrative essay : The best thing i learning today

This summer will be better than last summer. I'll go for a walk with my friends. Maybe I'll go to any camp. This summer I'll be sure to visit relatives. So, I'll go to the lake or river with parents and friends. On the beach, I'm going to play beach volleyball. This summer I'm going to have fun at parties. I will read the book, which asked me to read the teacher in the summer. It was the summer I want to make a party at home in any style, it's fun. And, of course, this summer I'm going to sit on the Internet, like any normal child. Thank you, dear teacher. Good holidays to you.)

 перевод:
Это лето будет лучше чем лето. Я буду ходить на прогулки с моими друзьями. Может быть я поеду в какой либо лагерь. Этим летом я обязательно буду посещать родственников. Так же, я буду ходить на озеро или речку с родителями и друзьями. На пляже я буду играть в пляжный волейбол. Этим летом я буду веселиться на вечеринках. Я буду читать книги, которые задали мне учителя для чтения летом. Именно этим летом я хочу сделать вечеринку у себя дома в каком-либо стиле, это весело. Ну и, конечно, этим летом я буду сидеть в интернете, как и любой нормальный ребенок за внимание, дорогой учитель. Хороших вам каникул. :)
П.С. я точно такое же написала, развеселила учителя и получила хорошую оценку))

Max got up (get up) early. He ... (cleaned) his teeth and ... (had) breakfast. It ... (was) 7.30 a.m., the 1 st of September. It ... (was) his first day at school . He ... (put) on his new school uniform and ... (took) flowers for the teacher. He ... (went) to school with his parents. His father ... (made) a video of him when he ... (gave) the flowers to the teacher. That day he had just a few lessons and ... (came) home early. After lunch he ... (went) for a walk with his new friend Anton. They ... (spoke) about their first day at school.Then they ...(told) each other about their summers. It was late and the new classmates went home. Max... (said): '' Goodbye, see you tomorrow''. And Anton said: '' Ok, see you, bye''. Max was tired but happy.