Проверьте, , текст! те, кто просто напишут, что всё правильно получат удалённый ответ. запятые тоже надо проверить. чем можно заменить слово so? hello, mr. brown! my name is eugene and i’m 9th grade student. i like traveling and doing some sports, so your summer camp is interesting for me. in this summer i have a lot of time, so i can stay for 3 weeks from the beginning of july. for my opinion, at this time the weather is the best, but that’s very important for outdoor activities. i would choose adventure workshop, because i tried diving last year and really liked it. also i have experience in film making, so film academy workshop would be interesting for me. i could help another children and learn something new. best regards, eugene.

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1 .so можно заменить that's why-вот почему (перевод)

2 надо исправить:

-I'm the 9th grade student.

-travelling

-This summer I'll have a lot of time

-I can stay(здесь надо написать где ты хочешь остановиться, предложение незаконченное)

-In my opinion

-не надо писать at this timeпросто This time

-Also I have an experience

Good luck

Hello, Mr. Brown!

My name is Eugene and I’m a 9th grader. I enjoy traveling and playing several sports, because of that I am interested in your summer camp.

This summer I’ll have lots of time on hand, and would like to participate for 3 weeks starting early July. In my opinion, that’s when the weather is best, which it’s highly important for outdoor activities.

I would love to do the adventure workshop, I’ve tried diving last year and really liked it. Also I have some experience in film making, so the film academy workshop sounds quite interesting. I look forward to helping other campers and learning new things .

Best regards,

Eugene.