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I am keen on football. In my opinion, this game is very exciting. It’s good for my body and for my mind. I have been interested in football since I came to school. Then I had my fist team. I usually play football a few times a week. You communicate while playing and feel emotions of other people. I like it because it’s a team game and for me it’s boring when you have to play alone. I enjoy my hobby because I can spend time with my friends and do what I want.  There is one more reason why football has become my hobby. It’s extremely popular with people. I think that it’s the best hobby.

“A friend who is far away is sometimes much nearer than one who is at hand.”~ Gibran Khalil Gibran ~
I make friends easily so I have a lot of foreign friend.
But the best of all is only one. He is from Chine. His name is Dean. He was born in Guangdong. He is fifteen. We have known each other for  two years.
He speak English well, so I communicate with  Dean on the Skype  almost every day.  When I  am needing get a  support  he  always gives me kindly
advice.
 Dean have  interests as the same as I have.
We can have some real talks , share some real feelings , discuss some life plans , dreams , studying  problems , secret happiness or sorrow My friend is very friendly, good – natured, sociable, kind, he is always smiling and laughing, he never loses his temper and he always keeps his word.
I think, nowadays it is very important to have  foreign friends,  because you are learning many interesting facts about people from  the another country about their traditions, habits and customs.