Сочинение на тему дизайн рая и ада

 I want to be a respected person. I know many people want to be a famous person because they think maybe many people will adore and respected them, but in my opinion, I want to be an ordinary and not ordinary person. The reason why I want to be an ordinary because I want to be a low-pitched person, and the reason why I want not to be an ordinary because I want to do things very high-key. I also know if you want to be a respected person first you must respect the other people and respect yourself. 
It is the first dream
The second dream it is to be a teacher.

My best friend is Diana.She is tall and she has a thin build. She also has blue eyes and a pretty face. She  likes to watch movies,watch anime and also she loves to eat.She often draws and she is good at it.She loves to collect puzzles.We often talk on the phone.Unfortunately, she doesn't have many friends in real life,but  she has friends on the Internet.Diana is very lazy, and still very untidy.Therefore, she loves to sleep a lot.Anyway, I love her the way she is.

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