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dear jill,
i didn't know you were in china. i hope you enjoyed your holiday and had a good time. you asked about our holidays, right?
in russia, a popular holiday called new year. it is celebrated on the night of december 31 to january 1. in this day adopted flock family for one table, give each other gifts, to drive dances under the christmas tree and look on fireworks. just popular holiday victory day. it is celebrated on may 9 - the very day-when the war ended. on this day, people go to the parade, give flowers to veterans, and in the evening watch fireworks and shows. the third popular holiday is maslenitsa. the uniqueness of this holiday is that it is celebrated not one day but a week! children, women, men-all having fun! they burn a scarecrow, eat pancakes, play dances and
oh, i almost blabbed! my favorite holiday is the first of june. no, not because it's a children's holiday, but because it's the beginning of the summer holidays! i usually buy a cake, sit down with the family at the table and begin to talk about the results of the year and school. later, i go to watch tv shows and cartoons, while eating sweets. without a doubt-this is the best day!
what about your favorite holiday? how is it celebrated in your country? waiting for your answer.
all the best,
xenia.​