Правильно? yesterday john came home late. he made a cup of hot tea? drank it and go to the swimming pool where he swam with his friend colin. at nine o clock the friends be the cafe/they decide to have supper. they sat dpwn at the table? made an order and speak about their plans for the weekend

Yesterday John came home late. He made a cup of hot tea, drank it and went to the swimming pool where he swam with his friend Colin. At nine o'clock the friends were the cafe. They decide to have supper. They sat at the table, made an order and spoke about their plans for the weekend.

Да, это правильно. Как мне кажется